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Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:34 pm ]
Post subject:  OCTOBER STORIES 2011

Okay, here we go. Finally.
I'm in North Carolina. The "computer" I was promised resembles a washing machine, and the Internet connection is two tin cans and a length of string, but let's give this a shot.
~ Rob

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

The Deal

Evan's world was a haze of ice and fog and his mind proved reluctant to engage, to embrace the blazing headache that stood hand in hand with cognizance. But caution hovered there, too, like the prick of a dagger, or a flame at his fingertips, and it soon became a matter of urgency to climb out of that cold pit and into a state of awareness.

It took him a few moments. And once he'd lifted his head and his vision had finally cleared he saw he was naked, secured at both wrists and ankles, and he lay on his back, spread-eagled and fastened down on a hard wood floor.

He panicked, and immediately began to struggle, and despite the cold his limbs and torso were soon glistening with sweat. He craned his neck, ignored the migraine's roaring tide and searched out his surroundings - pitch black but for a small lantern on a peg - a room stinking of rot, its corners wrapped in depthless shadow where all manner of things could hide.

He heard a door close. The sound was muffled but the act shook the lantern and made the shadows dance. Dust fell from above and for a horrible moment he wondered if the ceiling might fall on his head. Fear gripped his throat, immobilized his chest and made it hard to breathe.

Another door, opening so close he felt the chilly dash of displaced air. Sweat turned to dread and soaked beneath his skin. The light increased, a second lantern accompanied by a silhouette.

"You're awake."

While Evan struggled to recognize the voice, a familiar face came into view and his anger flared, poked his memory and pushed aside some of the fear. "Joey? What the fuck?" His voice was a pathetic, narrow squeak, and he tugged on the ropes, mortified.

The other man smiled. "You don't remember? You were back in town and we got talking at the bar over on Ferris Street. Oh, and I put something in your drink. I apologize if it's given you a headache."

"My drink? Shit, Joey, let me loose." The bar. Ferris Street. He could barely remember. He looked past his shoulder and along the length of his arm. The additional light offered no hasty cable ties, no duct tape. Instead the wrist had been carefully wrapped, over and over with thick hemp. The bindings were neat, the knots reverently done, which probably meant he'd been out for a while. He pulled harder and winced. "C'mon, this isn't funny."

"Oh, I agree." The other man placed the lantern on the floor, sat down and got comfortable. "Do you know where we are?"

"How the hell should I?" You put something in my beer, you shit-heeled prick.

Joey shrugged. Still painfully thin after all these years; shoulders arched like the folded wings of a vulture, his cheekbones sharp enough to cut glass. "We're in the Chase House. Remember we were reminiscing? About what you guys did to me? You and Terry?"

"I don't..." Evan thought about it, tried to recall; but it was difficult while his head was still pounding. He blinked, stared at the ceiling. The stupid Chase House? Half way along their street with its leaning walls, its rotten gate and overgrown yard; throughout Evan's childhood the house had been haunted, supposedly, and was allegedly the scene of two disappearances; it was an irresistible force and host to one minor act of childhood cruelty that, by the looks of it, had come right around and was now biting him firmly in the ass.

He tried to stay calm. "This was years ago. We were just -"

"- kids. I know. That's what Terry said, too. And as kids we don't know the half of it. Or at least that's how it should be."

Evan frowned. Terry. It had been Terry's idea. But yeah, they'd both jammed the door so Joey couldn't get out, even though they knew their friend was scared witless and his dad would take his belt to him for being home late. That had been part of Terry's plan, too. A vindictive little bastard Terry was, who'd always made sure Evan was a full partner in his crimes. And it had never been the same after that afternoon. Three friends had become two. And when Evan had gone to college, even that dubious partnership had dissolved. He'd heard Terry had left town, had simply taken off in his beat up old car. There had been no contact - no calls, no Facebook - nothing. Like he'd dropped off the face of the earth.

He swallowed. Regret had arrived and had chosen to dance alongside his fear, leaving his anger alone to wither. "Look, I'm sorry. If it means anything, I came back for you and you'd already gone."

His captor nodded dispassionately. "I know. But it was too late by then. I trusted you and you didn't stop him."

"Come on, man, I said I was sorry - you gotta let me go. This is stupid. It's kidnapping."

Joey shook his head. He shifted in the gloom, came up on his knees and then stood up. "No, not kidnapping - it's payment. I had to make a promise that afternoon." He picked up both lanterns.

Evan stared at him. "What - you're just going to leave me here?" And when Joey didn't answer. "Don't I get a light?"

When the other man had closed the door, leaving him in absolute, utter darkness, he tried yelling. He screamed until his throat hurt, he tried shifting his body and moving his fingers but he couldn't get a grip on anything. For a short while, regret and fear left him and terror paid him a call and he wondered if Joey had gone bat shit crazy and would set the house on fire with Evan in it.

But this was just a joke, wasn't it? Long overdue, sure, but he'd be okay, he'd be fine, providing he didn't freeze to death.

He fought despair, tried to stay calm and wondered what had happened to his phone, his car keys - his clothes. And tried to ignore the fact that he was tied to metal rings that looked way too old and permanent for this to be a spur of the moment prank. And that Joey had mentioned Terry, like he'd had seen him recently and -

He shut it all out. He couldn't see himself but he could imagine well enough - pale, glistening flesh, pathetic shriveled genitals, and limbs all stretched out. His wrists were beginning to hurt and his fingers were turning numb. And yet he thought he could feel the rope stretch a little. Maybe if he kept working on that.

He took a deep breath. Yeah, he'd just keep working, and screw that sonofabitch.


* * *


Joey sat outside on the porch steps. He didn't want to listen but knew it was due penance. And when Evan began yelling, his hands started to shake and it took him a few awkward attempts to turn off the lanterns. With Terry it had been easy. He'd had it coming. But it was an altogether different matter with Evan, despite the betrayal.

Minutes later, when the screaming began again, this time with a greater urgency and at a higher pitch, Joey leaned forward and wrapped his arms around his knees and squeezed his eyes shut, and he didn't open them until the screaming had stopped. He whimpered during the dull thumping sounds, cried out as he heard a muffled, wet slap, and dug fingernails into his arms when he heard bones snapping like gunshot. There'd be nothing left, not a scrap. Not even the rope.

When it was done he stared out into the dark for a long time. Payment. Two lives for the price of one, and now it was over. But it wasn't. He stood up, and what remained of his humanity fell away like an old snakeskin. He picked up the lanterns and walked down the path. On either side of him the entire street lay in darkness and ruin. The city had gradually shifted east, and this entire community lay derelict and forgotten. And now Evan was gone, that part of his life was forgotten too.

And yet he still belonged to them - to those who lived beneath, after they had shown their faces and offered their own brand of mercy on that terrible afternoon. And it hadn't mattered how many others he'd given them over the years, they had always insisted on Evan. He was part of the deal and that was that.

He crossed the street, climbed into Terry's old car. Six months, a year, the city would continue to thrive and he'd be back to appease their hunger. This was how it was, and it was all part of the deal.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

Gamorrah Falls

Dawn was slowly coming, sneaking up behind him like a wolf from a darkened forest, and the first hint of sunlight pierced through the roiling bulk of the night's last remaining storm cloud. He could see a pale glimmer of silver gradually stretching down the length of the gun's barrel. A cool draught of air streamed in through the open window and the breeze carried the promise of a new day into the gloom-shrouded room. He could smell a faint hint of jasmine and mint, mixed with the wetness from the night's storm, on the wind. He also caught the scent of burnt gunpowder and Ballistol oil from the gun in his tightly clenched fist and it was the perfume of murder.

His name was Bryant Arthur Kane and he had killed more times in his life than he could remember.

He sighed through clenched teeth. There were six dead men in the debris-strewn hotel room with him and he knew he wouldn't have long until others with lethal intent charged up the stairs and down the corridor outside to burst in on him. The gun's clip was almost empty. He didn't have enough bullets to fend off any new enemies. Not that it mattered. He relied on the gun out of habit, not because he needed it. As brutal and inhumane a thing as the Beretta 8000 Cougar .357 magnums automatic was, the violence it represented was his last tether to humanity. It was technology. A tool. Man made. It was a thing, inanimate, and it only became a horror when it was used against the living. Conversely, he was far worse than any mere gun; he, himself, was a weapon, a horror, a monster, all steel-thewed muscle and blinding speed and claws and fangs...

... and hunger. A rapacious, all-consuming, nerve-shredding, driving hunger. It lit his insides like an inferno, it hollowed him out like a bottomless bowl that demanded to constantly be filled. Furious ancient hunger.

He prayed he could hold on until daybreak. He wanted to see the sun one last time before the shrieking, bestial thing inside him finally broke free to maim and murder -- like that very same primordial urge had done inside the men he had already killed.

He had to hold on.

Funny how the vision of a little boy danced across his mind, supplanting the chaotic imagery of torn and shredded human flesh from only minutes ago. It had been the end of a long and hot summer's day from some fifteen years past when he'd come across the ceramic jar laying half-buried in a mound of dried, weed-speckled dirt outside the fence. The fence, water-stained, mud-spattered and in a serious state of disrepair, had encircled the yard to the old Wilton Place in the town of Gamorrah Falls. Ragweed and stinging nettles vied with poison sumac plants in the spaces between piles of moldy paper pulp garbage following twenty yard path right to the front door of the abandoned manor. The ramshackle two-story mansion had been a mess, with its partially collapsed roof, three attic gables with broken windows, weathered wood exterior and partially stripped paint nearly hidden behind the foliage of a trio of wide-boled, gnarled oak trees.

Hezekiah and Aristesia Wilton, wealthy owners of the local meat-packing plant that had employed a third of Gamorrah Falls' population, had lived and died in that old house. They'd been hard, unsympathetic people and local townsfolk on the whole hadn't liked them nor really much cared for the way they'd run their business at the slaughterhouse. The couple had run the Wiltonworks plant on the banks of the West Gamorrah River like they were slave-owners and their workers were indentured slaves, and when they'd died, the pair of them within days of one another, no one had mourned. Not even their children, the emaciatedly gaunt boy, Jemson, a snobbish social climber, who'd gone to an eastern Ivy League school to become an attorney, and mannish, unfriendly Cecilia Jean, who'd closed down the ancestral estate after their deaths, sold the meat-packing plant to a corporate food giant and vanished with the money to someplace overseas. Missing the noxious, foul-tempered presences of Hezekiah and Aristesia Wilton was considered, for the most part, a ludicrous exercise. The Wiltonworks Plant's new owners, though largely faceless and impersonal as most modern corporations were, was a welcome relief to most. Wilton Place had remained empty and unloved for a dozen years. And the town had almost forgotten the existence of the estate's acreage except for those occasions when rowdy, beer-fueled, hormonally-supercharged parties were thrown there by renegade, delinquent teenagers from Hackmenster High School.

But many were the stories about the Crow Jars, as the locals called them, quart-sized mysterious ceramic jars with strange and colorful markings rumored to contain anything from hidden gold and jewels the Wiltons had hidden from tax collectors to the fetuses of the twins sons Aristesia had supposedly miscarried decades ago. The Crow Jars, of which there were seven, had first been entered into Gamorrah Falls local legendry back when Jemson Wilton was an ungainly thirteen year old. Rumor had it that Jemson had befriended a old, one-eyed Native American Indian named Marcus Two Knives when a pair of bullies had tried beating the old man down one drunk Saturday night. Native Americans weren't at all well-liked by some of Gamorrah Falls' less Christian townsfolk and it didn't take much for some of the barely literate, periodically unemployed and unemployable bullies who frequented the town bars to take exception to having the Indian population around. Car mechanic Marcus Two Knives was a drinker, like most mid-thirtyish men busting their asses working to barely stay just above the poverty-level in the town, and he was known to secretly provide romantic services to a few of the lonely wives in the community. So it came to pass that a few of the rougher crowd just weren't having that, so they ambushed him one warm, mosquito-plagued night and applied their fists and boots to his backdoor, pussy-snaking ass. And, seeing this, Jemson Lloyd Patrick Wilton, who had hated rednecked bullies even more than he'd despised redskins, pulled out his father's Army-issue .45 caliber pistol and fired off a few warning shots at the drunken mob. Cursing them, the bullies had run off.

That was when a thankful Marcus Two Knives had stumbled bloody back to his rusted pick-up truck and shown his benefactor one of the three Crow Jars in his possession. No one could really grasp the logic in that act. Why, after getting the bejesus kicked out of you by a bunch of racist drunks, would you show the man who saved you, a man just as racist as your assailants, what was in a pair of special ceramic jars? And why would that same unfriendly reluctant samaritan kill you and then steal the jars? It didn't make sense. After that, the local legend got pretty murky. No one seemed able to agree upon the events that occurred thereafter.

Some say Jemson saw the jars were filled with gold nuggets and that's why he stole them away from Two Knives. Others said that Two Knives showed Jemson the future reflected in a mysterious mercury-like fluid that filled the jars. A few said that Marcus Two Knives showed Jemson that each jar held the dead, desiccated embryo of the unborn bastard twins who were Jemson's brothers, brothers fathered by Two Knives himself. And still others said that Marcus Two Knives had been a shaman, a Native American Holy Man, and that inside the jars were dark devils that a greedy Jemson Wilton enslaved to do his bidding. Piffle. Insanity. Bullshit.

The man in the room hotel waiting for the sun to finish rising, the same man who had, as a little boy, found one of those legendary ceramic jars, knew the truth.

Hunger had been in the Crow Jars, an abominable, millennia-old, hell-bred, alien hunger beyond any human understanding. There had been things in those jars, dead organic things, remnants of animal flesh, tattered skin, torn veins and shattered bone, decomposed bits and pieces of shredded meat, and those remains had been alive. Incredibly, impossibly, demonically alive.

They were called "the Nihasa" and they were spirits, devils who infected human flesh with the relentless, insatiable urge to torture and consume other human flesh. The crazed cannibal appetite with which the Nihasa infected the accursed was as dreamy and soul-numbing a kick as a heroin high, it was as mind-altering an elevator drop as Ecstasy, it was as heart-freezingly enervating, as supercharged, as methamphetamines. And when the hunger had been satiated, even though that satiation was only temporary, it was a feeling better than even the most intense sexual orgasm. It could not be resisted. Want it. Crave it. Need it. Hell, the poor soul infected with that hunger didn't WANT to resist it.

And that was what he, as an awkward little boy just entering his teen years, had found in a dirty, mud-stained, quart-sized, cracked ceramic jar fifteen dark years ago.

And, yes, to his eternal shame and damnation, he had willfully tasted the flesh of his fellow man and woman many times in the years since. Almost thirty years old, he had schemed, lied, hunted, trapped, murdered and slaughtered his way through high school, college and after.

The shame had become unbearable. Men and women, boys and girls, athletes and the infirm, he preyed on them all. But in his heart he knew the truth: this was someone's brother, someone's son, someone's sister or their mother, a lover, a husband, a wife -- the flesh he consumed belonged to people who belonged to other human beings, to families, to beings who had value in other people's lives... He was a monster.

He couldn't go on like that, living as some demonic animal disguised as a man. Living a phantom existence among a society unaware that alien millennia-old evil lurked ever behind gentle, pale blue eyes. He'd decided a year ago that he'd needed to do something about it.

He'd decided to find all the Crow Jars and all their recipients. He would set things right. He'd decided to bring them a long-delayed cold and final justice.

The six dead men in the room, brains blown out the back of their shattered skulls, their hearts ripped in half by thundering magnum bullet shells, had been the finders, reluctant owners, and finally slaves of the other Crow Jars.

He, himself, was the last.

The morning's sun shone a flood of golden light through the jagged-edged remnants of the broken window in the corpse-strewn room.

When he pulled the trigger of the weapon poised under his chin he wept with joy. It was going to be a beautiful day in Gamorrah Falls. He pulled the Beretta's trigger. A clap of thunder eclipsed his world and everything went black...

Two hours later, belching, feeling bloated, sitting amid a bloody pile of freshly gnawed bones, the bones of the others accursed by the Crow Jars, he came to senses, realizing the truth.

The last slave of the Nihasa could not end the curse. It was not allowed. As he had executed the others, someone would have to execute him. He couldn't commit suicide. He had to be killed. Murdered. And when that happened he would pass along the curse to someone new: the thing inside him would take up residence in the skin of his executioner. He would infect his killer.

Damn. Damn it all to hell.

He had to hold on. There was still work to be done. His name was Bryant Arthur Kane and he knew he had a lot more killing ahead of him.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

Walker

That night during 1963, I was sixteen and hated Cincinnati summers. My friends didn't have cars or air conditioning and we walked everywhere and sweated all day and night. Since we lived at home, we had to sneak to get laid, and the girls our age didn't line up to drop their pants; which led to me and Johnny on my stoop splitting a smoke. That's when he got the idea.

"Let's camp out in the tree house. We ain't been there in awhile."

"It's a long walk and it'll be dark soon."

"Bring a flashlight and some soda. It'll probably be cooler up there."

Not much of a plan, but better than sitting in the apartment.

"Sounds good."

My old man had stayed out drinking, my mother had gone to Bingo, and Johnny was spending the night. I left a note and we got out of Dodge.

The tree house was on a forest plateau in the outskirts, up an ancient oak where other younger trees intermingled below it on ground covered with brittle copper leaves that made crunch sounds when you walked on them. The tree house would be easy to spot if you knew where to look, but no one knew but our gang. I don't know who owned the land or why nothing had been built there. It was supposed to be a spooky place, but nothing had ever bothered us.

We approached near dusk, when things turn black and white. That massive dark oak, maybe hundreds of years old, was so thick we had built the tree house about thirty-five feet up it, with boards nailed like a ladder all the way up to a trapdoor in the plank floor. We had stolen the wood a little at a time from construction jobs.
I threw a rock up in the tree because we didn't like surprises.

"Anybody there?"

"Hey," Tom Mills yelled down. "You almost hit us."

"Just checking."

We climbed up through the trapdoor and shut it. Tom was in our gang, and his eleven-year-old cousin, Bo, was visiting from Kentucky. Like us, they had decided to spend the night to escape the heat. The main room was about fifteen by fifteen, with walls three feet high. A slanted lumber roof, about five feet above the walls and supported by corner posts, made the tree a kind of an open-air Tarzan house. A welcome cool breeze brushed through at intervals. It would get pitch black before long, but nothing below could get at us.

We had a kerosene lantern, cards, soda and cheese crackers, a machete, a couple knives, two flashlights, about seventy-five empty beer and soda bottles, five red building bricks, and two packs of smokes. With our green milk crate table and a few cushions and sleeping bags, we were downtown, as we liked to say.

A few hours later, after all the small talk faded, we played cards for cigarettes by lantern light. Bo was in the corner on his sleeping bag and he sat up suddenly.

"I heard a noise.”

Johnny dimmed the lantern. Beyond the faint light it was scary dark and silent. A distant owl hooted. Then, leaves crunched when something heavy began to circle our tree.

"It's an animal," Johnny whispered.

"It's on two legs," I said. "It can't be an animal."

"What else could it be?"

"It's too slow for an animal."

Bo moved away from the wall and sat next to us. I began a count. The thing took nine steps to circle the tree, making each step about ten feet apart. It had to be huge.

"It's him, isn't it?" Bo said to Tom.

"Who?" I said.

"I told him about Shawnee Jim," Tom said.

We had all heard the local legend from the frontier days about a freakish eight-foot tall white man called Shawnee Jim who hated the Ohio Shawnee and had killed more than fifty of them. A war party led by Chief Bluejacket captured Jim and tortured him to the point of death, even skinned him alive. They hoisted him way up a tree because of his height, wrapped a rope around his neck and dropped him. His head had popped off, and the rumor was he still came back looking for it. If he caught you, he would pull off your head and wear it back to Hell.

Bo's blue eyes went wide. "This could be the tree where they hanged him and he's looking for his head."

"It's probably some hobo," Tom said. "Ghosts aren't real."

"It's an animal," John said.

I grabbed a flashlight. "Let's find out."

At the wall, I peered down at near cave blackness. No human could see where they were walking down there without tripping and bumping into stuff. Johnny breathed next to me as I waited for the thing to come around our side. When the leaves crunched directly below us, I shined the flashlight down. The footsteps stopped. I saw only copper leaves.

"Shit," Johnny said. "An animal would have run."

I pointed the light every which way. We saw and heard nothing. When I turned the light off the footsteps resumed that same slow circle and heavy pace, cracking twigs and crushing leaves. I looked at Tom and Bo.
"Everybody grab a bottle and throw it down at the same time."

We waited, leaning over the wall, and when the thing stomped directly below us on another circle, we threw straight down with all our might. The walker instantly stopped. The bottles had bounced and rolled away. When I shined light down, nothing was there.

"That ain't possible," Johnny said.

I turned the light off and it started walking again, right below us.

"Somebody close the latch and sit on the trapdoor with the machete."

"I'll do it," Tom said. "Nobody will get past me."

We all looked at each other. We were trapped in some kind of Conan story with magic and unseen monsters, terrified of footsteps in the dark. I wouldn't have climbed down out of that tree for all the money in the world.

Nobody slept. The walker tormented us all night. We threw every bottle, can, and brick down at it. We even yelled and cursed it and told it to go away. Johnny finally threw our milk crate card table. We drank all our soda and smoked every cigarette we had, and in a panic, weighed Johnny's crazy idea to set the woods on fire, until we realized we could burn up. If we threw something, it stopped and then started again. Not once did we strike it, and that wasn't possible if it had been human. Twice it stopped on its own, and we cowered near the trapdoor with our knives and the machete, waiting for it to scramble up to kill us. After we ran out of things to throw, it kept walking, round and round.

At dawn, we heard a distant dog bark. The footsteps stopped at that moment. I don't know where it went. No one heard it move away. It vanished without a trace. Five minutes later, a hunter and his dog passed below us, moving fast, and we realized the ordeal was over.

I never went back to the tree house and neither did Johnny. I don't think Tom and Bo did, either. Bo returned to Kentucky and got killed in a car wreck by age sixteen. Tom was KIA in Vietnam when a sniper shot him in the head. Johnny drank himself into liver disease after a nasty divorce. I called him on the phone in Hospice. He actually sounded good and wasn't afraid of dying. He surprised me when he said one thing before we hung up.
"Maybe I'll finally find out about the walker."

We had never really talked about that night. I had almost convinced myself it had been a dream. The reality came back fast.

"Stick around awhile longer. We don't need to know right now."

"Yeah, maybe you're right," he said. "But I want to know."

He died that day, making me the sole survivor of our fright night. I can't even explain what happened or how footsteps could create such fear. I know it happened, and I was more afraid that night than I've ever been in my life.

I'm in no hurry to find the answer to the mystery.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

Excerpt From the novel “Mostly Fiction But All Completely True" by _____ _____ pg. 322:

We were damn fools to think that we could fight that fucking fire. We saw what happened to Holzer and yet, fools that we were, we thought that our love for the lab, and our “Superior Training” (0r so we thought) could somehow interrupt true destiny and keep Outer Hell alive. She was far to beautiful to let that glacier fire simply take from us. Water turned to dust/ foam turned to stone, and the chemical we “knew would work” only made the fire stronger, much much stronger, and much much colder.

They say that the experiment that day was something…wrong. They say that the men who worked on the supposed “Project Big D” were so bent on the idea of spitting in God’s face that they never stood back and actually thought about the consequences of what they were doing. Of course, nobody knows exactly what that experiment was, thought it is often said by storytellers and folklore experts that it was something that made things like “The Philadelphia Project” and “The Interstate-99 Ordeal” seem like mere child’s play, like tinker toys and a vast world of secret government side projects gone oh so terrible wrong.

There are conflicting reports as to how the fire actually started. Usually it is said to have started in “The Reactor,” though how it started and the ferocity of it still varies from tell to tell. Some say it started in a flash, some say that it was actually some sort of invisible fire at first and nobody say it until it was too late. The most prevalent telling however, says that the fire started as a small blue flame just to the left of “The Reactor” Emergencies and fires were events they had daily drills for. It was common knowledge that if the Sheetz Chemical Research Lab ever became in any sort of danger, that the lives of the workers that day meant nothing compared to protecting or erasing certain experiments going on.

It is said that the workers were frantic to completely erase as much of the lab as they could. They had already resigned themselves to death, but it was still their duty to protect the world from whatever projects and abominations they had been cobbling together for the past few decades. Computers were erased, chemicals put in fire proof boxes hoping to keep them contained, and things you may or may not call “animals” were simply released into the central Pennsylvania woods in hopes that they would eventually be captured or outright die.

Maybe it was curiosity, maybe it was ignorance, maybe it was that they could not leave what they devoted their lives to, but it is said that the 7 workers in the lab that day tried to return to the room in which the experiment took place. Upon returning they found the room and most of the rooms surrounding “The Reactor” engulfed in a terrifying electric blue and very very cold, inferno. The fire was apparently not “burning” the building, but it was simply disincarnating the huge laboratory into a fine black sand-like substance. Conflicting reports even suggest that one of the workers, sometimes named Madison, sometimes named Holzer, was unlucky enough to be touched by the fire and in a scream of unfathomable agony, was simply sucked into the impossibly cold blue fire.

Of course, the workers finally did try to escape with their lives. Weather or not any of the actually survived is a mystery to this day. Rumors of diaries and old forgotten memos exist. Some say that there is a tree near the former location of the lab that has the names of the workers there that day, with the words ”Forgive Us” carved next to some of the names. There is even talk of a limited publication of a man named Robert Myers who claims that his novel is “Mostly Fiction But All Completely true” that describes in all to real detail the day to day operations, experiment, and eventual downfall of he referred to as “Outer Hell”

As if by cliché, the government never has released any information about the lab, or even acknowledged it’s existence. Some could argue that this is proof positive that the lab is only a highway tale, but others are dead set on believing that a lab, somewhere off of Pennsylvania Route 30, somewhere between Breezwood and Gettysburg, there is a secret that will never be told. This secret has seeming been covered up by time, but for a privileged few, it is a very real, and very dangerous bit of information to be guarding.

Nowadays it seems that the story of The Sheetz Chemical Research Lab seems to be coming on to hard times and simply disappearing. It was not granted immortality through an episode of “Histories Mysteries,” nor will you find a bunch of teens and twenty-somethings perusing through the woods assuming every crack and creek in the forest is the ghost they are hunting for. If you are lucky though, if you stop at the right bar or motel along Route 30, you will hear a story. Sometimes they are claimed to be first had accounts, sometimes they are “friends of friends,” but they are said to be some of the last memories mankind has left of The Lab.


Excerpt From The Novel “Mostly Fiction But All Completely True” By ______ ____: “Epilogue:”

She is gone, dead, left to the elements and to the horrid creations we made within her walls. She is a ghost story now, a rumor, a “strange but true,” and I cry every day for her. I can no longer bring myself to wander in those woods, or to drive by the runaway truck ramp they used to cover her one and only dirt access road. All I have left are my memories. They days we cheered for the creations we made, the days we viciously fought over what could have been great blessings and terrible curses bestowed by god like men such as ourselves. I claim that this book is “Fiction” only because what we created in Outer Hell could never be described as “Real.” Only I know what really went on within the confines of the lab. Holzer’s cries still ring in my head, I still remember the long chess games with Nanci, and our hours of debate about the creation of this world will never be heard again. I know buildings cannot have a soul, but I would like to think that there, in the lab, she lived, and she still lives today, waiting to be reborn.

Author:  saginawhorror [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

nice i liked them all.

Author:  ttzuma [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

There are many more to come, Rob is having to go slow because of his computer and connections.

To the person who commented on an element of a story posting, I removed your post and took care of the issue. No worries, p.m. me if you have any other questions.

TTzuma

Author:  Jazminsdaddy [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

Wow. Very high quality so far.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

Across The Street

None of us should really be surprised at how it ended. We can say differently, but we’d be lying, especially to ourselves. I sat on my front porch steps, watching the police and EMTs do their thing in the street and at the house across it. The strobe lights bathed the neighborhood in red and blue, and, if I looked down at the right time, I could almost pretend I wasn’t covered in blood.

This was one of the older suburban neighborhoods in the city, even when my wife Erica and I moved here twenty-four years ago. Being an older area, we did have a few quirks that a lot of other places didn’t, most notably the cemetery behind the house across the street. They had nothing in common except a shared back fence, but to the kids growing up here, both places were as one.

Erica taught history at the local high school. Six years ago, she added a short lesson on folklore around Halloween, and that’s when she began hearing about our neighbors across the way. The place was haunted, people died there, the residents stole bodies from the cemetery. When Erica told me about the stories, she said she didn’t scoff at them, but I did. It also made us realize that we really didn’t know our neighbors. Erica made it her mission to do so.

That weekend, Erica made some chocolate chip cookies, put them on a plate, and headed across the street. I pretended to rake the yard and watched her go, then looked past her to the house. I’d looked at it every time I left my own, but that day was the first time I really saw it. A short wooden fence ran across the front of the yard and it was getting overgrown with vines. Instead of a gate at the walk leading to the house, there was an arbor, also heavy with vines, and it struck me at that point as menacing, though I didn’t understand why, and still don’t to this day. The grass was higher than normal and full of weeds. The fence was higher on the side yard, more for privacy than decoration, and on the north side a few tree branches hung over it. The front of the house looked like it was in some need of general maintenance, if not outright repair. The gutter sagged over the garage door and the paint looked like it had been applied during the first Roosevelt administration. Erica reached the front door and knocked, and I could see paint peeling from it.

The door opened, I heard Erica say something, and then she went inside.

Twenty minutes later, the door opened and Erica stepped out. She turned and smiled at an older woman who was standing in the doorway, supporting herself with a walker. The woman said something, they both laughed and Erica nodded. She turned to head back to our house and as the door shut behind her, the woman gave me a small wave. I smiled and waved back as the door shut. Erica bounded across the street, smiling the entire way. She gave me a quick hug, took my arm, and guided me into the house.

“Her name is Dorothy,” Erica said when we’d gotten inside. “She’s a widow. Her husband died two years ago while volunteering at the cemetery, which is where some of the stories probably come from. Her son, Matthew, had been helping her out, but he’s got…problems, and she says he’s a different person when he’s off his medications and winds up in Harding Hospital for a while. He’s there now. I volunteered you to help her with her yard and things, if that’s okay.”

“Absolutely. See, there’s always a rational explanation.”

I spent the next weekend doing all sorts of yardwork for an appreciative Dorothy. That weekend also happened to be Halloween and we all got a taste of what was to come. Awakened by screeching tires Sunday night, I got up, pulled back the bedroom curtains and looked outside. I saw nothing and got back into bed. Ten minutes later, the doorbell rang and I got up again, threw on my robe, went downstairs and answered the door. A policeman stood there and asked me if I’d noticed anything suspicious in the last few minutes as Dorothy had called and reported someone sneaking up to her house. I told him about the squealing tires and he thanked me.

The next morning, while Erica was at school, I went across the street and rang Dorothy’s doorbell. A man maybe my age answered the door, his red sweater contrasting his pale skin, small circles under his eyes. I stuck out my hand and introduced myself.

“Hi, I’m Seth. I live across the street. You must be Matthew.”

“Yeah,” he said and ignored my offered hand, which I took back when I realized he wasn’t going to shake it. “I’m home now, so stay away from my mother. We don’t need your help or anything else from you.” With that, the door slammed in my face. I stood there a bit, staring at the peeling paint I hadn’t gotten to yet on the door, then headed home.
Erica came home with more troubling news. According to one girl in her class, the stories about Dorothy’s house were taking on a life of their own, and the previous night’s incident had been a group of kids daring each other to go to the “haunted” house. Erica spoke to her class about leaving Dorothy alone, and that incident was it for the year.

As time passed, however, the kids became more brazen and the occurrences more often, not happening on Halloween but graduation, too, becoming a rite of passage for graduating seniors to ring Dorothy’s doorbell. Matthew was in and out of the hospital during that time, home for some incidents, gone for others. I could tell when he wasn’t taking his medications by the level of belligerence he showed the police officers who responded to his calls, even going so far to use the word “gun.” When he was in the hospital, Erica and I did everything we could for Dorothy, but as time passed she began to withdraw from us, until she stopped talking to us altogether last Christmas. Matthew came home from his last hospital stay on New Year’s.

One night in early June, I was sitting on the couch in the living room, half watching TV and half listening for cars passing by, wondering if any of them held teenagers. I was being hypnotized by a CSI rerun when I heard a car slow down and stop. I muted the TV and tried to hear more, but I heard nothing. I figured it was my next door neighbor coming home and reached for the remote to turn the volume back up when there was a pop-pop-pop, screams, squealing tires and a crash. I jumped up from the couch and ran for the door.

“What was that?” Erica asked as she poked her head out of the kitchen doorway.

I opened the door and saw a car had knocked over our mailbox and was sitting half in the street, half in my yard. A teenage girl got out of the car, looked around, saw me and ran to the door. She had blood on her neck and shoulder.

“My friend’s bleeding!” she yelled.

“Call 911!” I told Erica. As I ran to the car, I saw Matthew watching from his window before the curtains shut.
Two girls stood looking into the car from the driver’s side window, another sat in the backseat and I could see in the light from the car she was covered in blood. I opened the back door and saw why. She had another girl lying across her, her neck bloody from what I assumed was a gunshot wound. I put my hand on the wound, pressed hard to staunch the blood and hoped help made it in time. Erica ran down the driveway and started to pull the other girls towards our porch.

“We just wanted Tess to ring the haunted house’s doorbell,” one girl said, and I shut the rest of them out.

The police arrived, as did an ambulance. Two EMTs took over for me as the police talked to the teenagers. I walked slowly back to my porch, passing officers as they ran across the street, and sat on the steps. My attention stayed on the EMTs, so I don’t know exactly what happened with Matthew other than he was led, handcuffed, towards a police cruiser, yelling about protecting his house. The EMTs put the girl onto a stretcher, loaded her into the ambulance and sped off. Eventually, an officer came to talk to me and told me the news.

Tess McGill, eighteen, had died in my front yard. Erica held me close and, together, we wept.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

El Maestro

The Easter Bunny licked it off.

That sentence doesn’t make any more sense to me now than it did when my Spanish teacher first said it.

Let me start over. My name is Benjamin Swick, and I am a sophomore at Park Hill high school. Or was.

You always hear stories from kids about The Teacher, the one who hates all the students, the one the kids all hate back. Every school has one. The teachers who don’t care about your sex, race, religion, or deodorant type. They’re an equal opportunity offender.

By the time I reached high school, I thought I was past all that.

And then I met Mr. Stephens, and everything went downhill from there.

Mr. Stephens was the new Spanish teacher. I had him during for my third period class, and it didn’t take long for him to leave an impression on our class.

The first thing that caught my attention was his apparent lack of knowledge concerning the Spanish language. Then there was the case of looking up Ashley Tharp’s skirt, wearing white dress pants with no underwear beneath, and having Tara Payton read love letters from his multitude of supposed girlfriends out loud to the class.

But the day he both creeped us out and angered me the most was the Taco Bell day.

It started off with him entering the classroom free of his goatee he’d had all semester (and seemed to be obsessed with rubbing every fifteen seconds or so). So Tara naturally asked him what happened to it.

“The Easter Bunny licked it off,” he replied with a shit-eating grin, and that was it. I had no freaking idea what he meant by that, but the absurdity of it gave me chills just the same.

Later that hour, he announced he would be taking us on a field trip in a few weeks to eat lunch at an authentic Mexican restaurant.

“Like Taco Bell?” I asked, garnering a few chuckles from the class.

“Taco Bell is not authentic Mexican food!” Mr. Stephens shouted.

“Wow,” Tara said. “Overreacting a little, are we?”

"No, I’m not,” he replied. “The next person who discusses it gets detention.”

“Discuss what?” I asked. “That Taco Bell is authentic Mexican food?”

“That’s it!” Mr. Stephens screamed. “Ben, you have detention tomorrow afternoon!”

And not regular detention with Mrs. Schnee, where we could read or talk or do whatever. No, I had detention with Mr. Stephens, and spent 90 minutes writing I will not call Taco Bell authentic Mexican food in Spanish class until my wrist was numb. The few times I looked back over my shoulder, I would see Mr. Stephens gazing at me, rubbing the spot on his chin where his goatee used to be.

The Easter Bunny licked it off.

I wanted to get back at the creep. I confided with Ashley and Tara, and we planned it out.

Tara found Mr. Stephens’ address in the school directory, and determined it was just over three miles from the school. Ashley and I got out an hour early on Thursdays, so we decided we’d sneak over there after our last class and leave a little gift.

Pooling our money together, we made a quick stop at the Taco Bell down the street. Then we drove to Mr. Stephens’ house, parked, and unloaded five bags worth of authentic Mexican goodness all over his front porch. We tried to set it up nice, but we did lose a Mexican Pizza and Chili Cheese Burrito, both of which splattered all over the porch. It was beautiful.

“I see you brought dinner.”

Ashley let out a yelp and I nearly fell over into the grass. I didn’t need to turn to know whose voice that was behind us.

“Let’s head inside, shall we.” Mr. Stephens said. It was not a question.

“Why are you here?” I stammered.

“Because I live here,” he replied, giving me a You are such a dimwit stare.

“No,” I replied, my voice barely above a whisper. “Why now? School isn’t out yet.”

“It’s my study hall hour,” he said, still looking at me like I was the world’s biggest idiot. “Inside. Now.”

Mr. Stephens ushered us into the front living room, then motioned on us on into the kitchen. As we passed the hallway, I glanced to the bedroom at the far end and saw what I perceived to be a rabbit costume hanging on the door.

The Easter Bunny licked it off.

I didn’t have time to wonder what kind of sick games my teacher liked to play, as I was herded on to the back of the kitchen. Mr. Stephens opened a door that led to the basement.

“I’m not going down there,” Ashley squeaked.

“You will,” Mr. Stephens said. “Either on your own, or by me holding you. But you will go down there.”

As we reached the bottom, I heard a clanging sound and turned just in time to see two metal folding chairs crashing down the stairwell. I dodged the first one, but the second collided with my shin and I fell to the cold cement floor in pain.

“Sit,” we heard Mr. Stephens say from the kitchen, then he disappeared. Not knowing what else to do, we unfolded the chairs and sat.

Mr. Stephens returned about thirty seconds later, armed with the Taco Bell bags and a roll of duct tape. Finally breaking my paralysis, I jumped up, prepared to rush him and get out.

“No, no, no,” he said, dropping the food bags and whipping out a straight razor from his pocket. “SIT.”

He taped our arms behind us and around the backs of the chairs, then bound our legs together at the ankles. He taped my mouth shut as well, even though I’d yet to say anything since we’d been inside. I quickly found out I’d been the lucky one.

Mr. Stephens grabbed the closest Taco Bell bag and pulled out a bean burrito. He held it in front of Ashley, smacking it on her face.

“Eat it,” he said, shoving the burrito into her mouth. She gagged, and spit the burrito back out onto the floor. With a surprising quickness, Mr. Stephens slashed out with the razor, slicing her forearm. Ashley screamed in pain, only to have the burrito stuffed in her mouth again.

“Eat, or you get cut again,” he said.

Ashley ate the burrito. Then another one. And a Mexican Pizza. A couple of tacos. I don’t know how long it took, but he made her eat the whole bag. Then he grabbed the second one.

“No, please, I can’t,” she whispered.

“You can, and you will.”

I grunted, viciously shaking my head back and forth.

“Don’t worry, Ben. I have special plans for you.”

He started pulling items from the second bag. Double decker tacos. Chalupas. I felt like I would throw up and I wasn’t even eating anything. Ashley did start to vomit once, but Mr. Stephens slapped some duct tape over her mouth. After choking for nearly a minute, she managed to swallow it all back down.

“Her stomach won’t be able to hold it all,” Mr. Stephens said, turning to me. “Eventually it will fill up through the top of her stomach and work its way into her esophagus. She won’t be able to breathe, nor will she be able to release it. Unfortunately for her, she’s ingesting it too quickly to hope for a bowel movement to create more room.”

He began rubbing his chin again as he continued to feed her, that shit-eating grin appearing on his face. Ashley made it through two bags before I saw her throat start swelling up. Mr. Stephens forced one last soft taco into her mouth before duct taping it shut again. He used a lot, I guess to prevent any leakage.

Five minutes later, she tried to vomit again. With nowhere to go, the food caught in the back of her throat. Quiet during almost the entire sequence, she finally began thrashing about. Face blue and swollen, she jerked one last time and her chair fell over. Her skull hit the concrete in a sickening splat, but I think she was already dead. Mr. Stephens walked over and sliced open her abdomen with the razor. Steaming piles of partially digested food spilled onto the floor. I could see pieces of lettuce amongst the less discernible chunks.

“God, what a mess,” Mr. Stephens said. “Oh well, time for dinner. Don’t worry, I’ll be back for you,” he said, rubbing his chin. He picked up one of the leftover bags of Taco Bell, and disappeared upstairs.

******

I don’t know how long he’s been gone. Time is meaningless to me right now. I’m still sitting here, strapped to this chair, with nothing to look at but Ashley’s corpse. At least her body has stopped releasing various chunks and fluids onto the floor.

Wait, what was that? I think the basement door just closed. Yes, I can hear footsteps coming down the stairs. I pray it’s someone, anyone, who can stop this madness. Anyone but him.

But no. Here he comes now. I hear the soft swish-swish of his feet as he pads across the concrete. He’s rubbing his chin again, that same shit-eating grin spreading across his face.

And he’s wearing that damn rabbit costume.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

The Beach

We walk along the twisting path that leads to the beach. There are weeds on either side of us, long and thin and swaying gently in the ocean breeze. The moon is full and bright but faraway; its light barely makes a dent in the surrounding darkness.

Behind me the shimmering lights of our small town glitter like polished jewels. From this distance I can almost trick myself into believing it’s a nice place to live, that it’s filled with decent people being kind to one another. We tread carefully down a small hill and the town disappears as if somebody had covered it with a blanket. I look at David walking in front of me. He is tall and muscular where I am short and thin.

We hear the ocean before we see it. There is no sound as exquisite as waves crashing against a shoreline. The sand is warm under my feet, retaining the heat of the day like the memories of an old lover.

We come to the end of the path and arrive at the beach. I like to think of it as a different world. The seemingly endless blue ocean teeming with strange and wonderful life, the waves originating from a far off island that has never been scarred by the blundering feet of thick-headed people.

“This town is boring,” I had complained to David hours earlier.

“Isn‘t every town supposed to have a haunted house?” I asked. “Doesn’t every town have folk tales and legends and stories to tell around campfires? Why does this town have nothing but people who beat on you for being a little different?”

“Come with me,” David had responded. The knowledge in his voice and the promise in his eyes had both scared and intrigued me.

We walk along the beach for about a mile. David finally stops and looks around. The light from the moon reflects off his eyes and I notice that they are gold with green flecks. How could I have never noticed that before? God knows I have spent countless hours staring at his face. He sits down and opens his knapsack pulling something out.

“Fireworks,” he says and pulls out a small box of wooden matches. Using his hands he digs 5 holes in the sand and buries the fireworks about halfway down, lighting them in quick succession. A kaleidoscope of bright colorful light pierces the night sky, ripping it open like a birthday present. I hear a child laughing with glee. It is David, looking up at the fireworks; his face is so full of naked joy I can barely watch. I feel like I am intruding on a private moment but he looks at me and winks with those eyes.

“Isn’t it lovely, Daniel?” he says. “I saw fireworks for the first time on this beach many years ago. I never get used to their beauty.”

The fireworks display finally ends and the smoke floats languidly in the air, resembling mist off the water. David appears like an apparition out of the smoke and walks towards me. He puts his hands on my shoulders bringing his face close to mine. He runs his fingers through my hair as if inspecting me.

“Thank you,” he whispers and kisses me on the lips. Not a short kiss either but lingering, and with something that isn’t quite passion but nonetheless filled with longing and emotion.

I feel the hard angles of his face, the coarse sandpaper of his beard. This is the first boy I have ever kissed. I am scared and elated but too shocked to kiss him back. It occurs to me that I may regret this for the rest of my life.

He pulls gently away, his hand on my shoulders. “One day I will tell your story around a campfire,” he says putting something in my hand. “Now go.”

I open my hand. There is a small seashell there that I have seen on a chain around his neck. I look at him curiously and he points to the water. There is now clarity around the edges of the muddled centre that is my confusion. I walk through the wet sand to the shore line and the moon becomes brighter and lights a path from the shore to some distant point miles away in the water.

I turn around to look at David but he is no longer there. The beach is deserted, his footprints have seemingly vanished along with the smoke from the fireworks. The memory of his kiss, still imprinted on my lips, is the only evidence that he was ever here.

I dive into the water, the frigid water, quickly realizing that it will be almost impossible to swim with my clothes on, so I tear them off, discarding them like an old, unwanted skin. I swim and become one with the ocean, diving underwater as fish nibble my toes with curiosity.

I follow the stars back to the surface of the water taking deep breaths of cool salty air.

I open my eyes and she is in front of me. She has black hair and her skin is brown. Her face is kind.

She puts her hands around my face and brings her face close to me. “I smell him on you,” she says and smiles. She runs her fingers through my hair as if inspecting me. She opens my hand and takes the shell.

Her eyes are gold with flecks of green.

“Is this what you want?” she asks me.

“Yes,” I say.

“Come with me,” she says and the words are familiar. She embraces me and I feel a sense of weightlessness.

Through the shimmering water the stars look like diamonds against a sky as dark as black velvet.

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: OCTOBER STORIES

My Sister

My name is Thomas Pyper and I am 118 years old. I was 13 years old on September 7th 1972, the day I lost my sister.

The memories of that day are burned under my eyelids like a horror movie that you peek at between your fingers. When I go to bed it is the last thing I think of and when I wake up it lies beside me like a pitiless lover.

___________________________

It was the first week of school and the love of my life Jane Perry was sitting under a tree at lunchtime. Her long smooth arms wrapped around the body of my best friend Theo Leonard. Her brown eyes looking at him with pure 13 year old adoration. I had mentioned to Theo the night before that I had been planning to ask Jane to a movie.

I was brooding and silent as I walked home with my sister that day. If a cat had crossed my path I surely would have given it a good kick in the butt. No cat crossed my path that day, but my sister sure did. She was blabbering on about the normal stuff that 6 year old girls talk about. Any other day I would have found her constant chatter amusing.

But my fuse was burning hot and she lit it like a stub-wicked firecracker on the Fourth of July with her next comment: “I saw Theo and Jane together today. They were, like, kissing or something. I thought you liked her?”

I remember looking at my sister and seeing a knowing smile with a bit of cruelty mixed in like a sour cocktail. Or maybe I didn’t see it. Maybe I wanted to see it so I could lash out at something. Or someone. All that matters is I laced into her with venom to rival the most poisonous snake in South America.

“Margaret, fuck off,” I told her. “Get out of my sight before I kick your little ass down the street. I don’t want to hear you or see you!”

Brothers and sisters fighting is about as old as prostitution. But I had never cursed or raised a voice at my sister. I saw her eyes crinkle and her mouth tremble as if a Lilliputian earthquake had settled on her lips. I’m sorry I wanted to tell her. So help me God I did. But her body stiffened and she took off running, so I let her go. She wasn’t crying and I needed time alone.

I could always apologize later. Or so I believed.

She stopped running and started to walk about 50 or so yards ahead of me. She would occasionally look back and stick her tongue out at me. I would respond with the middle finger.

I had just started to think about Theo and Jane again when I felt a shift in the environment. I felt like an antelope when a starving lion enters its territory.

A white van drove past me. The white was gleaming, spotless, like the plundered, polished tusk of an elephant. The bottom of the van, in contrast, was sloppily painted red as if the driver had driven though a puddle of blood. An odd feeling washed over me. A sense of wrongness I guess. But saying this van was wrong was like saying the sky over the Grand Canyon was blue. It didn’t do it justice.

There was something unnatural about the van.

I turned my head in time to see the side of the driver. His arm on the steering wheel was white, hairless and glistening like a wet slug. As I watched, he raised his hand and gave me the thumbs up sign. His thumbnail was long and sharpened to a fine point. He then pressed the horn of the van and an odd tune spewed forth like bile from the stomach of a rabid animal.

Dum de de Dum de de dum da dee dee

It sounded like music from a jack in the box before the clown pops out. I wanted to scream and cover my ears from this dreadful song and I waited for the driver to pop his head out the window. I was sure he would have the face of a clown but with jaundiced eyes that had merrily witnessed the slaughter of millions. His teeth would be sharp, but mossy with rotting flesh.

Instead the red brake lights blinked on and with tragic slowness I realized that he was slowing down near my sister. The van stopped and I saw my sister turn her head and her lips moving but I couldn’t hear what she said. For some absurd reason I stopped in my tracks, unable to move. The hairless arm reached out of the window and held something in its hand: a lollipop, bright and orange like a pumpkin before Halloween. My sister reached over and plucked it out of his hand like she was plucking a dandelion from grass. The hand went back inside and then appeared again this time with 4 lollipops. Four different colors, stuck in between each finger. The door to the van slowly opened and I heard the harsh squeak of dry hinges.

Goosebumps, slick and plump, covered my body like the skin of a thanksgiving turkey.

The air became hot and arid, the air of a desert filled with bodies where the bones had long turned to dust and settled with the sand. The world became silent as if my ears had become black holes.

I called my sister’s name and ran towards her. She looked at me, stuck out her tongue and then stepped into the white van, swallowed up like the old lady who swallowed a fly.

I continued to run but the van drove off, not quickly, but slowly as if to taunt the pathetic inadequacy of the human body. Finally, it sped away and when I finally thought about the license plate number it was too far away to read.

I ran home screaming. I opened the front door and saw my mom in the kitchen. She looked at me and a horrible understanding etched itself onto her face with a dull chisel. I fell to my knees and collapsed on the floor as dark dreams of a white van with red paint tore through me.

Two days later I put my first ad in the local newspaper.

I am looking for a man with a white van with red sloppy paint covering the bottom. His van horn plays kids music and he has lots of lollipops. Don’t approach. Dangerous. He took my sister. Her name is Margaret. Here is her picture:

Please call T. Pyper at 245-5685

I have placed the same ad in the local newspaper every week since.

My story has entered the realm of local folklore and taken on a life of its own. Parents tell their kids, don’t fight with your sister or brother because the man with lollipop fingers will get you. He drives a van made of bone, painted with the blood of children. He won’t stop hunting until he has finished painting his van.

Outside the world is a different place. But I remain here, amongst the cobwebs and the memories, placing my ad, waiting for a response. I had a house visit from a doctor about 2 years ago and she was shocked at how healthy I was. Tell me your secret she said, so I can tell my other patients. The cruel irony is I found the fountain of youth in my sister’s disappearance.

People call me crazy. Your sister and the man that took her are long dead they might say. You were 13 years old, of course your mind is going to make up things about what you saw and felt. Why do you still place those ads? Why do you still carry on?

To them I say that man was different. He had a touch of the supernatural about him. A kind of evil permeated his being and his van. I think he is still out there somewhere, driving his white van with the red paint. His hairless white hand rummaging through his box of lollipops.

As for my sister…

Maybe she escaped but has no memory of who she is and where she came from.

Maybe he keeps her locked in a cell in his damp, grey basement.

Maybe she’s in the back of that van, tied up and scared, waiting for her brother to save her.

If I’m still alive, won’t you allow me the possibility that she might be alive too?

Author:  Rob Dunbar [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:28 pm ]
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Burning Rain

Chalk stood before me, his shoulders slumped. Though he didn’t have drool spilling out from between his lips, he still looked like an idiot with his mouth wide open and his eyes bulged out as he stared at my blistered hand. After a minute or so he slowly lifted his head and made eye contact with me. I saw worry lines creasing his brow. I simply shrugged to let him know I was alright. Chalk averted his eyes and then nodded back. Then, he slipped into a far corner of the building, dragging his guilt along with him. Let him. The little prick deserved to suffer. That’s the second time this week I saved his ass because he got back too late.

What I had really wanted to do was to shove my burnt hand right into that opened mouth of his and let him choke on what he did to me. Fuck his concern. I was in pain and it hurt like hell. Still does. My hand was bright pink from the burning and the skin had peeled back some, though the burn didn’t go all that deep. Which was a small relief. The last thing I wanted to be doing was changing bloody dressings for the next week.

Hell, maybe I’m a little too hard on him. I guess every one of us here has fucked up one time or another. But you know, it should have made us more careful. Instead, we all seem to be getting more careless, or “more dumber” as Sherlock says.

He’s’ one to talk though. It’s Sherlock’s fault that Rose is gone. It wasn’t the burning rain that got Rose, it was the spidler. And damn, there was no excuse for it. Sherlock was in charge of her, it was him that was supposed to make sure Rose came back from the park an hour before door closing. But he let her play outside too long. Shit, she was just a little kid, she didn’t know no better. Sherlock’s got to live with it though. However long that will be. He pretends like its just one more of us dying, but you can tell it’s messed him up, watching that spidler eat Rose up whole like that. Spidler’s like to take their time eating too. I wonder how long Sherlock listened to Rose’s screams before he couldn’t take it anymore and just left her there.

It’s too bad about Rose because that means there are only five of us left. What a waste. Why only five? Well, the others are gone because those stupid bastards were careless too. Maybe Sherlock’s right, we are getting “more dumber”.

An adult grabbed Sneakers two days ago when he reached out for a can while foraging in a grocery store. Sneakers is the one kid who should have known better. Shit, he’d been a food hunter for a long time. He knew there was no more canned food in plain site anymore. The thing is, we don’t really know if Sneakers might still be alive. The poor bastard. If he is alive, I bet he wishes he wasn’t.

Crayon, well, she got all burned up in the rain. It was really odd because she knew it was getting dark and the burning rain was coming. But she just sat there on that old chair, ignoring us and reading one of the books. I still wonder if she just didn’t hear us or if it was her plan to stay outside as late as she did. From the window we all watched her die. But that wasn’t the worst part. The worst part is that we had to scrape her up the next morning. Nobody wants to walk past that shit every day. The whole thing was a shame really. We could have used her tonight.

And I can’t forget Jersey. He was tough, but not tough enough I guess. A Gorildog tore him to pieces only last week. But not before Jersey managed to tear one of the damn things limbs off. And, after it finished with Jersey, the damned Gorildog ate its own fucking arm.

And so it goes…

I know I shouldn’t think about this shit. It’s depressing. Bad enough we have to spend our evenings in this hell hole. I know, I don’t have to make it worse thinking about the guys that are gone, but I can’t stop thinking about them. Especially Wise.

Wise was the one guy that kept everything from falling apart here. He gave us all our assignments. He told us what to look for when we were foraging. He gave us weapons.

And he taught us how to read the few books we had.

He called those books ‘folk tales’, but I think they are more than that. I liked To Kill a Mockingbird and Catcher in the Rye, but it’s hard to believe in a world like the ones in those books. Shit, who the hell ever thought up a book where adults weren’t killing and eating kids? Who’d ever believe there were girls like Scout and boys like Holden? Let me tell you, they wouldn’t last a minute in the real world. My favorite book was The Day the Towers Fell. At least that seems true to life. Wise never liked reading it though. After I would ask him to read from it, for some reason he would get real quiet. And, if he picked me to sleep with him that night, well, he’d hug me tight until I fell asleep.

I loved Wise. I know he loved me.

Yeah, someone might take that to mean we had sex. They’d be right. Hell, Wise had sex with all the girls. Only Jersey thought that it was wrong, and well, Jersey’s not here anymore is he? Then again, neither is Wise. So really, I shouldn’t even give a shit anymore and stop thinking about both of them. But I can’t. It might help if I knew which one of them knocked me up. But then again it might not. After the baby is born and it’s time to feed, well, I don’t really want to know which of them is the daddy of my breakfast.

It’s almost time to sleep. It’s getting dark and we have to be quiet. Especially late at night. That’s when the boomers come. Yes, even during the burning rain. And it’s not that the boomers hear really good. Any noise, loud or soft will cause them come at you. No matter how many times they’ve tried to crash their way in it stills scares the shit out of me. Wise had put steel up over the windows a long time ago, and we really beefed up the doors, but still, you don’t want em coming and booming against the building. I just hope they don’t find the cracks on the back wall.

I’ve got to pick one of us tonight.

I don’t want to do it, but hell, it’s been too damn long. I wish Chalk had the balls that Wise had. Wise knew what he had to do to keep us alive. O.k., maybe it was some kind of guilt that caused Wise to make his decision, who the hell knows. Though he never said it, I could tell he knew what happened to make this world all fucked up. Maybe he was even part of the reason. He always told me it didn’t used to be like this, but if it’s true, he’s the only one of us who knows why.

I remember that night he gathered us around him, telling us what he was going to do and why. Not that he had to, we all knew why. I can still see him there, in the middle of the room, stripped naked and picking up that piece of glass. He didn’t say a word when he plunged it into his belly. I don’t think he knew how painful it would be because when he tried to grab the glass and open himself up more, he fell down on his back moaning, really loud too. When he figured out he couldn’t finish it, he looked over at me and nodded. I knew what I had to do. I grabbed some gloves and then took hold of the glass. I ripped open his belly and continued on up his chest as far as I could go. I sat him up against the back wall and then widened the cut up enough to let his intestines fall out. I remember them steaming in the cool air. We all made a mass rush for the food. Yeah, it was raw and bloody, but we were so hungry none of us cared. We ate good that night. Nothing went to waste.

And now, I gotta pick someone else to feed us. I think I’ve made my decision. It’s time to find out what kind of balls Chalk really has.

Author:  ttzuma [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 6:25 pm ]
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Wow, I feel like I just read an anthology I bought on Amazon.

Author:  saginawhorror [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 8:38 pm ]
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its official i'm no longer hungry after finishing the last story.

Author:  TMLCrow [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 8:52 pm ]
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I'm feeling even less comfortable with my story after reading the others. There's some excellent stuff here.

Author:  ttzuma [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:00 pm ]
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I haven't the slightest clue who wrote what. I guess we have to see a list of who contributed in order for me to guess.

And I'll wait until tomorrow to give my thoughts on the individual stories. I have to reread them a few more times, but I will say, out of all the batches we've done before, this seems to be the highest quality of stories in any of our exercises.

Author:  Jazminsdaddy [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:57 pm ]
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Author:  JJHolden [ Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:16 pm ]
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Wow. Some very, very cool ideas in the above stories. I like how some have turned the subject matter on its head, or about face, as it were, and I must admit there was one tale that made me laugh really hard at the end, and I mean that in the best possible way (I must have a nasty, nasty sense of humor). :*

I also took the liberty of checking some of the comments regarding previous exercises. This is the first time I've joined you guys with this and I didn't want to wade in and offend anyone. I see you were all positive but honest with one another, and so I shall endeavor to be the same.

More tomorrow when I've read 'em again! Good work, folks.

:v :v :v

Author:  Craig Cook [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:05 am ]
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So I scrolled through and read one story at random. That was more than enough to make me wish I hadn't ended up submitting mine...

Author:  Jazminsdaddy [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 8:42 am ]
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Craig, which story?

Author:  ttzuma [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:10 am ]
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Please understand, the comments we all make here are supposed to be constructive, they are not meant to malign or disparage the story or the author. This is an exercise for most of us, a way to get our writing chops down and for others to make what they feel are helpful comments. For those who are joining us for the first time, NO OFFENSE is intended. Those commenting can be way off base or even wrong in their assessments, it's all just opinions. And everyone's opinion is welcome.

Author:  Jazminsdaddy [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:13 am ]
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One of the stories that has really stuck with me is El Maestro. It is batshit insane and I love it.

The Easter Bunny licked it off? Love it.

Feeding someone Taco Bell until their stomach explodes? Love it.

The teacher coming down the stairs of the basement with a bunny suit on? Freakin' love it. I can only imagine what is going to happen next.

After reading this story I am inspired to write something truly bizarre.

Nice job!

Author:  ttzuma [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:15 am ]
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The Deal: I enjoyed the story. I liked that it was split up into two parts giving us both characters perspectives. I thought the second part was extremely well written and effective. I got carried along with the narrative on this section beautifully. I thought the first part was well done, but slightly overwritten. I found myself stumbling over a few words and sentences and thought the author was trying too hard for atmosphere by using too many metaphors. But that's just me. I like to run with a story and thought that the pace in the first part was broken up occasionally. I also liked where the author went with the topic and though I kinda knew where the story was going, I enjoyed the ride that brought me there. All and all...a very good story.

I won't rank or give my opinion on my favorite stories until I finish commenting on them all.

Author:  Jazminsdaddy [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:24 am ]
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The Deal: As I mentioned before I think The Deal is a knock out. Like Tony said, I wasn't exactly surprised about anything that happened but it was written so beautifully I was totally absorbed in the story. The descriptions and so forth were pretty amazing:

"He panicked, and immediately began to struggle, and despite the cold his limbs and torso were soon glistening with sweat. He craned his neck, ignored the migraine's roaring tide and searched out his surroundings - pitch black but for a small lantern on a peg - a room stinking of rot, its corners wrapped in depthless shadow where all manner of things could hide."

Pretty damn good! If I had to guess I would say this story was written by one of our more "established" writers.

Author:  ttzuma [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:34 am ]
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Author:  Jazminsdaddy [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:10 am ]
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Gamorrah Falls

This one was interesting. Like The Deal I thought this one was very well written in parts. I really like the idea of the jars with the demons in them and I really like your description of them:

There had been things in those jars, dead organic things, remnants of animal flesh, tattered skin, torn veins and shattered bone, decomposed bits and pieces of shredded meat, and those remains had been alive. Incredibly, impossibly, demonically alive.

Very vivid imagery!

My only quibble is I think the story could be tightened up a little bit, especially the section about Hezekiah and Aristesia Wilton and the slaughterhouse, etc. Also I am a little confused about Bryant Arthur Kane. I thought it was Jemson who obtained the jars and was killing people? Who then is Bryant? To me anyways, it is a bit unclear.

Other than that, quite a fantastic story, one of my favourites!

Author:  ttzuma [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:16 am ]
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Gamorrah Falls: What I liked about this story is that it took the topic in a direction that I didn't expect. I liked that it felt pretty original and how it was a period piece...things I enjoy in a horror story. I also enjoyed the lack of dialog; how the author had to get his message across on atmosphere and back story which I think is hard to do. The imagery was excellent and I could see many of the scenes as they were played out. I did think there were too many run on sentences however; where my mind thought a sentence should end, my eyes kept on going. It would make me realize I was reading something instead of getting lost in the narrative. And this is a personal thing, but I thought some of the paragraphs were too long and they should have been trimmed or broken up. The story could use some good editing also as it was confusing in portions.

I really did like this story. After forcing myself to slow down and reread it a couple of times I really got into it. I thought the idea was very good and thematically well executed. This story will stay with me awhile

Author:  ttzuma [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:22 am ]
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Author:  ttzuma [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 11:25 am ]
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Walker: A very good story, well told with scene's of adolescent excitement that run true. The best literal interpretation of the topic. For me, it flowed perfectly, I was never once taken out of the story. And I thought the coda was great, a perfect ending that explained nothing by was emotionally compelling and satisfying. I can't think of one helpful thing to say about this story, for me, it was near perfect.

In the interest of fairness, Thad and I briefly discussed this thread late last evening and came to the conclusion of who this author was. I just want to state that after this discussion I'm 100 % positive who it is (no, I will not reveal it) and that it did not influence my opinion above. And for those interested, between the two of us, we only knew with certainty who authored two of the stories.

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