Hey Mark, sorry it took me a bit to read your story. We had a big Halloween party last night which my wife and I wrote a murder mystery and did a lot of prep for and I didn't really have a chance before today. I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it. I felt for the main character and the tragedy that befell him. I really liked the spooky procession he witnessed. This seemed like it would have made for an excellent Twilight Zone or Night Gallery episode back in the day. Thanks for sharing it. And Happy Halloween by the way!
